This is just to say
I have Pies
The Delicious pies
That was In a vault
And which
You were
Probable Eating a normal pie
Forgive me
They were Made of secret ingredients
So Delicious
And so WarmThe blue is the words I changed but the original poem is...
I have eaten
the plums
that were in the icebox
and which
you were
probably saving for breakfast
Forgive me
they were delicious
so sweet
and so cold
I enjoyed doing this task I had lots of fun!
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